Comments on: Running Out Of Love – A Song http://www.coreystewartonline.com/2010/07/running-out-of-love/ Singer, Songwriter, Musician & Blogger Mon, 19 Dec 2011 12:47:48 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Brett Stokes http://www.coreystewartonline.com/2010/07/running-out-of-love/comment-page-1/#comment-162 Brett Stokes Wed, 28 Jul 2010 15:14:47 +0000 http://www.coreystewartonline.com/?p=1842#comment-162 Hey Corey, First issue is with a couple of words not being clear (as noted above) Second issue is with the feel/tempo/melody ... I am musically under-ecucated and cannot really answer your question well, sorry ... best wishes Hey Corey,
First issue is with a couple of words not being clear (as noted above)
Second issue is with the feel/tempo/melody … I am musically under-ecucated and cannot really answer your question well, sorry …
best wishes

]]> By: Corey Stewart http://www.coreystewartonline.com/2010/07/running-out-of-love/comment-page-1/#comment-142 Corey Stewart Mon, 26 Jul 2010 13:04:17 +0000 http://www.coreystewartonline.com/?p=1842#comment-142 Is the issue because of the way the song's recorded or, is it the melody and/or phrasing of the lyrics itself? I have a feeling you're feedback is about the melody, am I right in my assumption? Love the feedback btw, thanks for taking the time to listen. I really appreciate it Corey :) Is the issue because of the way the song’s recorded or, is it the melody and/or phrasing of the lyrics itself? I have a feeling you’re feedback is about the melody, am I right in my assumption?

Love the feedback btw, thanks for taking the time to listen. I really appreciate it

Corey :)

]]> By: Brett Stokes http://www.coreystewartonline.com/2010/07/running-out-of-love/comment-page-1/#comment-140 Brett Stokes Mon, 26 Jul 2010 11:35:31 +0000 http://www.coreystewartonline.com/?p=1842#comment-140 I have an issue with the phrasing/emphasis on some words - in the chorus "It brings me down" and "I'm empty now" are both muffled on the second or third syllable ... the lyric is very down, I need the singing to be a bit more upbeat emotionally ... maybe a lot more up I have an issue with the phrasing/emphasis on some words – in the chorus “It brings me down” and “I’m empty now” are both muffled on the second or third syllable …

the lyric is very down, I need the singing to be a bit more upbeat emotionally … maybe a lot more up

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